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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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slowly

The villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and then he would killed him later.

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The villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and kill him later.

  • The villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and kill him later.
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The villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and kill him later.
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Yoong LiatThe villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and kill him later.
There are many who would rather not see the infinitive split. I think it works better in this sentence where you have it than somewhere else.

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