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Kedra Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Slogans: do they sound English?
Hi All, I am working over the slogans for the company I work for (offshore software development). Here are my versions. We will select only one. Yet I would like to make sure they are grammatically correct and sound English. I am not a native speaker. Please advise and thanks so much for any help:
- In partnership with success
- Solving everyday business challenges
- Remote partner at hand
- Do IT with us
- Simply reliable
- Simply reliable code
- Strength(Power?) in the code
- Strength is in the code
- Code is the key
- IT fuel for your business
I appreciate your assistance.
- In partnership with success
- Solving everyday business challenges
- Remote partner at hand
- Do IT with us
- Simply reliable
- Simply reliable code
- Strength(Power?) in the code
- Strength is in the code
- Code is the key
- IT fuel for your business
I appreciate your assistance.
Top answer
In Partnership with Success -- Good Solving Everyday Business Challenges -- Too mundane Remote Partner at Hand -- Odd image Do IT with us -- No! Can be taken obscenely! Simply Reliable -- Good Simply Reliable Code -- Too much Code Power -- Good The Strength is in the Code -- Too much Code is the Key -- Good IT Fuels Business -- OK
- In Partnership with Success -- Good Solving Everyday Business Challenges -- Too mundane Remote Partner at Hand -- Odd image Do IT with us -- No!
- Can be taken obscenely!
- Simply Reliable -- Good Simply Reliable Code -- Too much Code Power -- Good The Strength is in the Code -- Too much Code is the Key -- Good IT Fuels Business -- OK
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In Partnership with Success -- Good
Solving Everyday Business Challenges -- Too mundane
Remote Partner at Hand -- Odd image
Do IT with us -- No! Can be taken obscenely!
Simply Reliable -- Good
Simply Reliable Code -- Too much
Code Power -- Good
The Strength
Solving Everyday Business Challenges -- Too mundane
Remote Partner at Hand -- Odd image
Do IT with us -- No! Can be taken obscenely!
Simply Reliable -- Good
Simply Reliable Code -- Too much
Code Power -- Good
The Strength
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Thanks!!! Very helpful indeed. Are you here 24/7? 
You always reply so fast!
You always reply so fast! 00
I keep normal hours, but we may just be in neighboring time zones. I'm in Yokohama, Japan.
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Ah. Well, I must say goodnight then, Kedra, while you still have a full afternoon and evening ahead of you—may they be as pleasant for you as they were for me.
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I agree with Mister Micawber's suggestions and offer one more...
For the last slogan you could have "IT: fuel for your business".
For the last slogan you could have "IT: fuel for your business".
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Does IT fuel my company? Or does it make it easier to accomplish the core tasks for my company?
I actually liked "The Power is in the Code" but that just goes to show that you'll get 100 different opinions from 100 different people.
I actually liked "The Power is in the Code" but that just goes to show that you'll get 100 different opinions from 100 different people.
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Grammar GeekDoes IT fuel my company?Being a data architect...Yes!
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They are all good. My favorites are:
Do IT with us - I see nothing wrong with the vague prurient implications of this; you want to grab the reader's attention and if this is what it takes, then go for it.
Strength in the code - Strength is always a seller.
Strength is in the code - Strength, yes.
Do IT with us - I see nothing wrong with the vague prurient implications of this; you want to grab the reader's attention and if this is what it takes, then go for it.
Strength in the code - Strength is always a seller.
Strength is in the code - Strength, yes.
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