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Mrgreego Posted 16 years ago
Vocabulary

Slogan to check

hi all,

I'm creating a game and need help with proper translation of my slogan and "About" section.
It's probably fine, but I want it look profesionally and as not english native I'm not 100% sure. If you have problem understanding what is this game about, it's then written wrong Emotion: smile Please help!
  1. Car Battle is a game built to allow car enthusiasts to achieve (at least virtually) great collection of cars of all parts of the beautiful Automobile History.
  2. All cars (actually 1200+ of them) are represented by cards which you collect into special albums. Albums are very diverse and presents different parts in Automobile History. You'll find here cars expensive like hell and cheap ones, beautiful and with controversial design, latest state of the art prototypes and ones that rolled off production lines decades ago. Get as many albums as possible and fill'em with cars you collect by battling other players or buy on auctions. Have fun!
  

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Hi Mrgreego: Here are some suggestions... Car Battle is a game designed for car enthusiasts to create (at least virtually) a great collection of cars from the entire history of the automobile. # The cars (there are more than 1200) are pictured on cards which you collect into special albums.

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  • Hi Mrgreego: Here are some suggestions...
  • Car Battle is a game designed for car enthusiasts to create (at least virtually) a great collection of cars from the entire history of the automobile.
  • # The cars (there are more than 1200) are pictured on cards which you collect into special albums.
  • Albums are very diverse and represent different epochs in automotive history.
  • You'll find here the rarest expensive exotic cars as well as cheap ones, cars with beautiful and controversial designs, the latest state-of-the-art prototypes, and even some models that rolled off the production lines decades ago.
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Hi Mrgreego:

Here are some suggestions...

Car Battle is a game designed for car enthusiasts to create (at least virtually) a great collection of cars from the entire history of the automobile.

# The cars (there are more than 1200) are pictured on cards which you collect into special albums. Albums are very diverse and rep
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thank you, first one is ok?
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