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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

slogan

Hi just would like to check with you all that does this slogan make sense?

Never gets involved with black magic as it will cost you life
  

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It has grammar problems and as a slogan it is poorly styled. A slogan reads more like this: Never get involved with black m agic—it will cost you your life.

— Mister Micawber

  • It has grammar problems and as a slogan it is poorly styled.
  • A slogan reads more like this: Never get involved with black m agic—it will cost you your life.
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It has grammar problems and as a slogan it is poorly styled. A slogan reads more like this:

Never get involved with black magic—it will cost you your life.
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Thank you for fixing the error. I'll take note on that.Can you check for me another one more slogan as stated below:

The consequences of black magic can ruin your life in no time
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AnonymousCan you check for me another one more slogan as stated below
Slogans need to be very brief, to the point, and memorable. You seem to be waffling over ineffective vocabulary. It should read no more than this:

Black magic can ruin your life.
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