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Lcchang Posted 10 years ago
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Hi everyone,
I would like to ask for your advice. What's happening is that I am planning to run a tutoring business in my country, which will be offering both Chemistry and English lessons to high school students who are cramming for University Entrance Exam. I have hired two teachers who will be in charge of the courses respectively.
Now I need to think about the branding and advertising for these two teachers, so I have come up with some slogans for each teacher. By now I have made some as follows and please let me know if they sound alright to you native speakers.
Charles Chemistry Class- Life House of Chemistry
(This was created by Charles himself. I asked him why he used "Life House" for his slogan. He said he wanted to build a atmosphere in his classroom like a "life house". I don't know what a "life house" means. Will anyone tell me if that makes sense to you?)
Al's English Class- We help you be the best in English.
Al's English Class- Enjoy the charm of learning English.
Al's English Class- Instant learning provider of English
Al's English Class- About English, all you can learn is here.
Al's English Class- All you can learn about English is here.
Al's English Class- All you can learn about English
(Do they sound OK to you? Is there any grammar mistakes? Which one sounds the best to you, or do you have any better idea?)
Thank you and I look forward to your suggestions.
LCChang
I would like to ask for your advice. What's happening is that I am planning to run a tutoring business in my country, which will be offering both Chemistry and English lessons to high school students who are cramming for University Entrance Exam. I have hired two teachers who will be in charge of the courses respectively.
Now I need to think about the branding and advertising for these two teachers, so I have come up with some slogans for each teacher. By now I have made some as follows and please let me know if they sound alright to you native speakers.
Charles Chemistry Class- Life House of Chemistry
(This was created by Charles himself. I asked him why he used "Life House" for his slogan. He said he wanted to build a atmosphere in his classroom like a "life house". I don't know what a "life house" means. Will anyone tell me if that makes sense to you?)
Al's English Class- We help you be the best in English.
Al's English Class- Enjoy the charm of learning English.
Al's English Class- Instant learning provider of English
Al's English Class- About English, all you can learn is here.
Al's English Class- All you can learn about English is here.
Al's English Class- All you can learn about English
(Do they sound OK to you? Is there any grammar mistakes? Which one sounds the best to you, or do you have any better idea?)
Thank you and I look forward to your suggestions.
LCChang
Top answer
You have not used "respectively" correctly. You need to mention the people individually to refer to them respectively. I don't know what "life house" means.
- You have not used "respectively" correctly.
- You need to mention the people individually to refer to them respectively.
- I don't know what "life house" means.
- I wouldn't use it.
- I am not fond of any of the English class choices.
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You have not used "respectively" correctly. You need to mention the people individually to refer to them respectively.
I don't know what "life house" means. I wouldn't use it.
I am not fond of any of the English class choices.
Maybe something like this: Al's English Class - Everything you need to become fluent in English.
I don't love that; it's just an idea
I don't know what "life house" means. I wouldn't use it.
I am not fond of any of the English class choices.
Maybe something like this: Al's English Class - Everything you need to become fluent in English.
I don't love that; it's just an idea
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