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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Slogan

Im starting new tourism company. I have made a slogan but not sure weather its grammatically correct. It is "Reviving your vacation dreams" OR "Revive your vacation" OR "Reviving your vacation". Could anyone please help me to sort it out?

Other suggestions are also welcome Emotion: smile

Thanks
Shoaib
  

Top answer

What is it exactly that you want to express? Could you tell us a little more? 'Revive' seems a bit negative to me.

— Mister Micawber

  • What is it exactly that you want to express?
  • Could you tell us a little more?
  • 'Revive' seems a bit negative to me.
  • What happened to their dreams before?
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What is it exactly that you want to express? Could you tell us a little more? 'Revive' seems a bit negative to me. What happened to their dreams before?
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Here, where I will be operating company, people goes on vacation back home. Not any other place. So I want people to spend vacation in other ways, not the same traditional way.

Also, there are some people here who wants (dreams) to go to vacation other than their home country but they cant go because of limited funds. So I will be targeting those people as well.

Hope that explain
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Then I think you need something like:

Raising the bar on your vacations
Enhancing your holidays
Taking your dream holiday

No doubt others will have other ideas.
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Sounds Reasonable. But can we use word "Revive" in anyway?
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Revive implies that something is close to death. As Mr. M has suggested, it is not a good choice here.
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