Just delete the first verbosity: Our value of x proved to be slightly smaller for the z potential and much smaller for the y potential than those given in Ref [1]. Also, logic suggests that you need to change either 'value' to 'values' or 'those' to'that'.
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snuppelinaDo I have to use a hyphen after the first numeral to imply that there should be a word "level" after it, but it's not included to avoid repetition?That is the practice, but overall, it looks a bit messy and confusing. Also, there is no call whatsoever for 'respectively', which requires two sets of matched data.
snuppelinaThe hyphen you're asking about is not actually a hyphen,Then I suggest you clarify that, too:
snuppelina "Figures 4 and 5 depict the parameters ... at the levels of 6.76 and 11.3 MeV, respective
Mister MicawberThe parameters were equal for the negative 7/2 state at the levels of 6.76 and 11.3 MeV. (Or 'negative-7/2'?)Yeah, I did that, thank you!
snuppelina there is a minus sign at the top following 7/2.That is what is confusing. I suggest the word instead.