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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Sleeping well
The article originally written by a student has been revised by me. Please help me correct the errors. Thanks!
I’ve been attending class in EGRC for a long time. During these days, I’ve learnt a lot of general knowledge and new information not only from textbooks but also our field trip activities. To be honest, I was eager to learn English with great enthusiasm and interest in the early stage. After some period of days, the pressure from schoolwork is getting heavier than before. We have to deal with lots of homework while doing extra activities outside of school. Homework overload is stressing us students who need more time to chill-out and relax. Therefore, attending EGRC class is not an easy, carefree task, but a challenging and demanding one. Nevertheless, attending EGRC class helps me learn a lot about discipline, dedication and the rewards of hard work.
Let me talk about my hobbies. First, I like reading novels, especially detective novels and fantasy novels. Reading makes me smarter, opens my mind, and improves my analytical thinking. Second, I love singing. Singing can improve my sleep, makes me relaxed, increases in self esteem and confidence, strengthens the memory and the power of concentration. I love Taylor Swift’s Shake It Off and I Knew You Were Trouble.
By the way, I’m more of a homebody because I don’t like outdoor activities, like playing sports, jogging, hiking, etc. As a saying goes, “All work and no play makes a Jack a dull boy.” Being lack of exercise, I just do averagely well in my academic achievements. After I discovered the crux of the problem, I have found the keys to improve my bad study habits. First, I need to eat well. By eating well, I will think more clearly and handle stress better, and my immune system will be tougher. Second, I need to sleep well. Sleeping well is a key part of a healthy lifestyle, and can benefit my heart, weight, mind, and more. Sleeping well helps me remember things clearly, concentrate better, and be in a good mood. Third, I need to exercise well. Exercise gets me moving—and moving is good for the body and mind. Exercise can improve my life, control my weight, combat health condition and disease, and release stress.
I’ve been attending class in EGRC for a long time. During these days, I’ve learnt a lot of general knowledge and new information not only from textbooks but also our field trip activities. To be honest, I was eager to learn English with great enthusiasm and interest in the early stage. After some period of days, the pressure from schoolwork is getting heavier than before. We have to deal with lots of homework while doing extra activities outside of school. Homework overload is stressing us students who need more time to chill-out and relax. Therefore, attending EGRC class is not an easy, carefree task, but a challenging and demanding one. Nevertheless, attending EGRC class helps me learn a lot about discipline, dedication and the rewards of hard work.
Let me talk about my hobbies. First, I like reading novels, especially detective novels and fantasy novels. Reading makes me smarter, opens my mind, and improves my analytical thinking. Second, I love singing. Singing can improve my sleep, makes me relaxed, increases in self esteem and confidence, strengthens the memory and the power of concentration. I love Taylor Swift’s Shake It Off and I Knew You Were Trouble.
By the way, I’m more of a homebody because I don’t like outdoor activities, like playing sports, jogging, hiking, etc. As a saying goes, “All work and no play makes a Jack a dull boy.” Being lack of exercise, I just do averagely well in my academic achievements. After I discovered the crux of the problem, I have found the keys to improve my bad study habits. First, I need to eat well. By eating well, I will think more clearly and handle stress better, and my immune system will be tougher. Second, I need to sleep well. Sleeping well is a key part of a healthy lifestyle, and can benefit my heart, weight, mind, and more. Sleeping well helps me remember things clearly, concentrate better, and be in a good mood. Third, I need to exercise well. Exercise gets me moving—and moving is good for the body and mind. Exercise can improve my life, control my weight, combat health condition and disease, and release stress.
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contiluo I’ve been attending class in EGRC for a long time. This is odd because, you have not established which class you are talking about. It would be better to write attending a class or, attending classes .
- contiluo I’ve been attending class in EGRC for a long time.
- This is odd because, you have not established which class you are talking about.
- It would be better to write attending a class or, attending classes .
- contiluo During these days, During this time would be more natural.
- contiluo To be honest, I was eager to learn English with great enthusiasm and interest in the early stage .
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contiluoI’ve been attending class in EGRC for a long time.This is odd because, you have not established which class you are talking about. It would be better to write attending a class or, attending classes.
contiluoDuring these days,During this time
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