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User_gary Posted 16 years ago
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Sleep with sprawling, snug yourself, step to the side

You have a room only three persons can sleep on the floor with sprawling, but if you make room and snug yourself four persons can sleep. There persons were already sleeping, I entered and asked the three persons in lying position "Could you people step to the side/move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?

Please correct my sentence and suggest me better versions too.
  

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Hi, You have a room in which only three persons can sleep sprawled on the floor, but if you make room and snug yourself four persons can sleep. Three persons were already sleeping there . I entered and asked them, "Could you people step to the side/ move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?

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  • Hi, You have a room in which only three persons can sleep sprawled on the floor, but if you make room and snug yourself four persons can sleep.
  • Three persons were already sleeping there .
  • I entered and asked them, "Could you people step to the side/ move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?
  • Please correct my sentence and suggest me better versions too.
  • There was a room in which only three people could sleep sprawled on the floor, but if they really made themselves small then four could fit in.
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Hi,

You have a room in which only three persons can sleep sprawled on the floor, but if you make room and snug yourself four persons can sleep. Three persons were already sleeping there. I entered and asked them, "Could you people step to the side/move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?

Please correct my sentence and suggest
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