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These fragments are for my blog, So I may not write it too much into detail..
I want to write on how much the social networking sites have helped every one to be in touch. But then too if some one special is missing or does not get time to be in touch through these technology the whole world seems to be depopulted. We become so much dependent on such sites that now if no one updates themselves we feel the love / affection is all over and there is no other way left to be in touch. But here we come to know the strength of our mind and heart and memory which does not need any social sites to be close to our loved ones who r far away. Our memory spans thousands and in seconds we are there.. I need to write something that though the sites, emails phones helps us to know about our loved ones but beyond some extent where all these does not work our telephathy or mental strength works.. We feel we are still very close without all this technologies. and all this Technologies gives happiness for a while we cannot be dependent on them all the time.
Please put the whole stuff in some good words for me..
Thanks all in advance.
Please help me out on the above...
I want to write on how much the social networking sites have helped every one to be in touch. But then too if some one special is missing or does not get time to be in touch through these technology the whole world seems to be depopulted. We become so much dependent on such sites that now if no one updates themselves we feel the love / affection is all over and there is no other way left to be in touch. But here we come to know the strength of our mind and heart and memory which does not need any social sites to be close to our loved ones who r far away. Our memory spans thousands and in seconds we are there.. I need to write something that though the sites, emails phones helps us to know about our loved ones but beyond some extent where all these does not work our telephathy or mental strength works.. We feel we are still very close without all this technologies. and all this Technologies gives happiness for a while we cannot be dependent on them all the time.
Please put the whole stuff in some good words for me..
Thanks all in advance.
Please help me out on the above...
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How about your trying to put it in good words yourself first, and then we will check what you've done.
- How about your trying to put it in good words yourself first, and then we will check what you've done.
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How about your trying to put it in good words yourself first, and then we will check what you've done.
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OK Mr. Micaber I will give it a try..
I wish not to write in full as its for my blog.. but this is one fragment of it to be corrected..
""... with the help of things like 'phones,smes,emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep ourselves connected to our friends and far away relatives. but as we get used to it we find we are getting fully relied on such tech
I wish not to write in full as its for my blog.. but this is one fragment of it to be corrected..
""... with the help of things like 'phones,smes,emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep ourselves connected to our friends and far away relatives. but as we get used to it we find we are getting fully relied on such tech
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I have underlined some problem areas. Try to correct them:
"... with the help of things like phones, smes, emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep ourselves connected to our friends and far away relatives. but as we get used to it we find we are getting fully relied on such technologies to keep ourself updatedabout the
"... with the help of things like phones, smes, emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep ourselves connected to our friends and far away relatives. but as we get used to it we find we are getting fully relied on such technologies to keep ourself updated
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Thank you very much for your co-operation.. I have tried to correct the words underlined by you..
"... with the help of things like phones, emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep ourselves connected to our friends and far away relatives. But as we get used to it we find we are getting dependend on such technologies to keep ourself updated, t
"... with the help of things like phones, emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep ourselves connected to our friends and far away relatives. But as we get used to it we find we are getting dependend on such technologies to keep ourself updated, t
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We don't write things for you, but we are happy to keep checking your work if you make continued efforts to improve. Please notice the changes (in bold):
"... with the help of things like phones, emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep connected to our friends and relatives far away. But as we get used to it, we find we become de
"... with the help of things like phones, emails, Facebook and other social networking sites we keep connected to our friends and relatives far away. But as we get used to it, we find we become de
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Thankyou so much Mr. Micawber Iam very happy with your reply. It will really help me out in completing my blog.
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"What if all these wanes off? [That verb has no meaning for me]
Will our love or affection diminish if our communication are on the wane??
Is the above now sensible?
Will our love or affection diminish if our communication are on the wane??
Is the above now sensible?
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If I send you the link to my 'memoir' thread for correction will it be visible to all???
I dont wish to make it a public but needs to be corrected. Where should I sent and how?
Please suggest.
I dont wish to make it a public but needs to be corrected. Where should I sent and how?
Please suggest.
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Will our love or affection diminish if our communications are on the wane?
Is the above now sensible?-- Yes. Never use more than one question mark or exclamation point for good writing.
If I send you the link to my 'memoir' thread for correction will it be visible to all? I don't wish to make it a public but needs to be corrected. Where should I sent and how? -- I c
Is the above now sensible?-- Yes. Never use more than one question mark or exclamation point for good writing.
If I send you the link to my 'memoir' thread for correction will it be visible to all? I don't wish to make it a public but needs to be corrected. Where should I sent and how? -- I c
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