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After lunch the session was Knowledge and skill on product by Robin. At the beginning of the session he divided the participants into two groups and said them to make a plane by the paper. After that one participant selected the five good quality planes from two groups and shared his opinion why he selected two planes from one group and three from another. The next task was for two groups to make a list of “What kind of knowledge and skill of a product”. After that they shared their lists.

Shawn79 · Accepted Answer

After lunch the session was Knowledge and skill on product by Robin. At the beginning of the session he divided the participants into two groups and told them to make paper airplanes. After that, one participant selected the five best planes from the two groups and shared why he selected two planes from one group and three from the other. The next task was for the two groups to make a list of “What kind of knowledge and skill of a product”. After that, they shared their lists.

I don't understand the parts in red, specifically the phrase "knowledge and skill". These parts most certainly need to be changed, but without assuming what you mean I'm not sure what to suggest. Do you mean training on the product? How to use the product?

Anonymous · Answer

Knowledge and skill on product - Actually it is training session name. Actually I talked with the participants about knowledge and skill of business.

Shawn79 · Answer

Shawn79What kind of knowledge and skill of a product

Unfortunately it still doesn't make sense. These wouldn't be the right words unfortunately.

Maybe: make a list of the facts about and uses of the product. Something like that?

Anonymous · Answer

If I write - the session was "Knowledge and Skill about Product" by Robin.  Is it correct?

Shawn79 · Answer

OK, I think I understand better!

"Information" is a more natural word than "knowledge" in this context. Also, people have skills but products have capabilities, which when worth pointing out can be called "features". I don't know if you intended two distinct meanings by "knowledge and skill" but here's my suggestion anyway:

After lunch the session was Information about the Product Features by Robin. At the beginning of the session he divided the participants into two groups and told them to make paper airplanes. After that, one participant selected the five best planes from the two groups and shared why he selected two planes from one group and three from the other. The next task was for the two groups to make a list of the product's features. After that, they shared their lists.

Without knowing exactly what the product and its features are, I can't guarantee the wording is correct. It's the best I can do with limited information about them.

Also is Robin a man or woman? Make sure you use he or she correctly.

Sir, please check the sentence.

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