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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Sir please check the application and if correction need please correction this

Dear Sir,

I beg to state that I am ........., saving account number ..... On 16th May, 2016 your bank informed me that some money (€ 500) have sent me my foster parent from Netherlands. He sent this amount for my birthday gift. Last year he also sent me some money for my birthday gift in my account. Mr. X is a Dutch, 68 years old, lives in Netherlands with his family. He is my foster parent. I will ensure you that if my sender wants to back from me this amount of money I will give him.

Therefore, I would like to request you please take necessary steps for this purpose so that I can receive the money as soon as possible.
  

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I don't understand what you're trying to say in your letter. Please write it in simple terms.

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I don't understand what you're trying to say in your letter. Please write it in simple terms.
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I want to write a application to Bank Manager for receiving remittance money

Dear Sir

I beg to state that I am Dipika, my saving account number is 163.101.146 at X Branch. On 16th May, 2016 your bank informed me that some money (€ 100) have sent my foster parent from Netherlands as my birthday gift. Last year he also sent me some money for my birth
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AnonymousI beg to state that
This is wordy and unnecessary.
AnonymousOn 16th May, 2016 your bank informed me that some money (€ 100) have sent my foster parent from Netherlands
On 16th May, 2016 your bank informed me that some money, € 100, was sent by my foster parents in the Netherlands.
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In Canada, If you arrange with your bank to send money to my account at my bank, the transfer will happen automatically. I do not have to write a letter to my bank.

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