Sir please check my grammatical mistakes it's urgent.
Sir Please check my grammatical errors and sentence correction .
Write a application to the honourable railway minister for train take stoppage at the Phulera junction.
Subject- Regarding the AGRA-AJMER ( 12195) INTERCITY take 2min stoppage at Phulera Junction.
Dear Sir,
I beg to say that Agra-Ajmer intercity Train number 12195 departure from Agra at 5:00 am and reached Jaipur junction at 9:30 am.It goes to Ajmer via Phulera Junction.it reached ajmer at 11:00 am.but it does not take stoppage at Phulera junction due to this Makrana marble supplers aur business man face a lot of inconvenience.
I request you to please this train take only 2 min stoppage at Phulera junction .
I am looking forward to hearing positive reply.
Your faithfully
Ayesha
Date-08-06-2017
Top answer
"Take stoppage" is not natural in American English. We would write this: Write a application to the railway minister asking if it would be possible to have more trains stopping at the Phulera junction.
- "Take stoppage" is not natural in American English.
- We would write this: Write a application to the railway minister asking if it would be possible to have more trains stopping at the Phulera junction.
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"Take stoppage" is not natural in American English. We would write this:
Write a application to the railway minister asking if it would be possible to have more trains stopping at the Phulera junction.
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