Single paragraph-natural?

Hi.

Is the given answer to the following question natural? Thanks.

What do you recommend the government should do to help people spend their free time in the best way?

I think government subsidies on healthy leisure activities is a very good idea; I mean the government must heavily subsidize the recreation centers promoting  healthy activities. On the other hand, the government must impose high taxes on unhealthy activities. This way I think the government can encourage people to take up healthier hobbies. The government must also finance more advanced recreation centers and entitle the youth and teenagers to a discount.