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Karen15 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Simultaneously

Hello,

Please check my paragraph below:

A few days ago, when she posted that she reached 1000 followers, he unfollowed her with all his multiple accounts simultaneously!

Thanks.

  

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Change "with" to "in", and take out "multiple."

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