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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Simple short letter!

Dear all,
Could you please correct my short letter?

I just want to say thank you for CD and I got it yesterday. That's great. All the pictures seem like a remembrance of our trip but some picture made me upset especially concern about children and their situation. ! But I really love all the pictures. Anyway, thank you for your helping hand.

Thank you so much.
  

Top answer

Here is my suggested letter. I made some changes for grammar, some for style. I am unsure what you are referring to about the children and their situation, so I can only hope I expressed your thoughts correctly.

— Doctor D

  • Here is my suggested letter.
  • I made some changes for grammar, some for style.
  • I am unsure what you are referring to about the children and their situation, so I can only hope I expressed your thoughts correctly.
  • I just want to say thank you for the CD, which I received and I got it yesterday.
  • It is That's great.
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Here is my suggested letter. I made some changes for grammar, some for style. I am unsure what you are referring to about the children and their situation, so I can only hope I expressed your thoughts correctly.

I just want to say thank you for the CD, which I received and I got it yesterday. It is That's great. All the pictures seem li
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