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Lucas21c Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Simple sentence
Could you tell me whether the following sentence sounds okay?
Thank you.
The cloudless skies of the sunniest day of that bloody summer in 1969 looked like the endless blue ocean that no life could live there any longer.
Thank you.
The cloudless skies of the sunniest day of that bloody summer in 1969 looked like the endless blue ocean that no life could live there any longer.
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I'd write 'where' instead of 'that'
- I'd write 'where' instead of 'that'
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The last part isn't grammatical. This is a suggestion:
... looked like an endless blue ocean where life could no longer live.
... looked like an endless blue ocean where life could no longer live.
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