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Lucas21c Posted 12 years ago
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Simple sentence
Could you tell me whether the following sentences sounds okay?
Thank you.
1. His writing is innovative and radical where he sees God as being which is created by humans, not create them.
(Among humans, the humans, and humam beings, which one is most natural wording in this sentence?)
2. He was severely criticized for his speech which seems racial discriminate where he regards black people as the soil of major offenses.
Thank you.
1. His writing is innovative and radical where he sees God as being which is created by humans, not create them.
(Among humans, the humans, and humam beings, which one is most natural wording in this sentence?)
2. He was severely criticized for his speech which seems racial discriminate where he regards black people as the soil of major offenses.
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lucas21c Could you tell me whether the following sentences sounds okay? 'Where' is generally too casual when you are not referring to a location, lucas. And you need to study commas and other punctuation: 1 .
- lucas21c Could you tell me whether the following sentences sounds okay?
- 'Where' is generally too casual when you are not referring to a location, lucas.
- And you need to study commas and other punctuation: 1 .
- His writing is innovative and radic al: he sees *** as a Being created by men , not one who creates man .
- 2.
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lucas21cCould you tell me whether the following sentences sounds okay?'Where' is generally too casual when you are not referring to a location, lucas. And you need to study commas and other punctuation:
1. His writing is innovative and radical: he sees *** as a Being created by men, not one who creates man.
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The 'major offenses' means felony. If I change the second sentence into "~ as the root of felony/serious offenses," will it be okay?
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Ah, I see. No. Then something like this:
He was severely criticized for his speech, which is racially discriminatory: in it he regards black people as the instigators of major crimes.
He was severely criticized for his speech, which is racially discriminatory: in it he regards black people as the instigators of major crimes.
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1. The 'major/serious offenses' cannot mean 'major crimes?'
2. How about "~ black communities as the source of mojor crimes?" Can it be a natural expression?
2. How about "~ black communities as the source of mojor crimes?" Can it be a natural expression?
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#1 is confusing. I did not understand it in your original text, if you recall.
#2 is OK if you wish.
#2 is OK if you wish.
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