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Subash2008 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Simple Past

Could you please check the below story written by me for any errors.

On the way from my School, I heard a strange noise from the garbage bin placed on the street. I walked towards it and looked inside. Surprisingly I saw that a bacteria and virus fighting each other. Bacteria was stretching its leg and shouting to virus. Bacteria was shivering with anger.I listened to their conversation. The matter is that while bacteria was sleeping, virus kicked on bacteria's feet accidently. Arguing was going on with full temper. At that time an old amoeba came to the scene and interfered. She asked them why both were fighting for those small things like men does. Hearing this I felt ashamed and I quickly walked to my home.

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Subash.S
  

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On my way from my s chool, I heard a strange noise from a garbage bin placed on the street. I walked towards it and looked inside. To my surprise I saw that a bacteri um and virus fighting each other.

  • On my way from my s chool, I heard a strange noise from a garbage bin placed on the street.
  • I walked towards it and looked inside.
  • To my surprise I saw that a bacteri um and virus fighting each other.
  • B acteri um was stretching its leg and shouting at V irus.
  • B acteri um was quaking with anger.
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On my way from my school, I heard a strange noise from a garbage bin placed on the street. I walked towards it and looked inside. To my surprise I saw that a bacterium and virus fighting
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Here are a few more arguing phrases:
They were arguing fiercely.
They were arguing loudly.
They were arguing bitterly.
They were arguing up a storm.
They were fighting like cats and dogs.
They were fighting tooth and nail.
The were fighting like Kilkenny cats.
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Thank you so much Enoon.
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Thank you so much Jay.

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