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Vincent tee Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Simple letter to manager. Pls help to check grammar & sentences

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00Would you please give a hand to help to verify my grammar & the structure of my english sentences resides from the letter below. Thanks !02br
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01font00Hi Reena,02font02br
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01font00Since you told me that I could discuss anything with you, I would like to take the opportunity now. Currently I am quite concern about my future career and would like your comments. For these past 4 months, I have tried to contribute as much as I could and work around the clock to put in extra work hours even on Saturday and Sunday to learn and contribute for the team. I understand I am working on plenty of things but a00lthough I am doing job multitasking however I could prove all my multitask-jobs were done with high quality and beyond expectation.02font02br
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01font001.00 001) BW Reporting Development02font02br
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01font002.00 002) BW Support02font02br
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01font003.00 003) Training management02font02br
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01font004.00 004) MI Newsletter02font02br
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01font005.00 005) Web programming02font02br
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01font006.00 006) Graphics + Multimedia02font02br
01font00I would like to know further about the last conversation you have discussed via teleconference and did mention about:02font02br
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01font001)00 00Buying me over to project team02font02br
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01font002)00 00Will give me plenty of BW development work to do that could exceed what Vincent has taught me02font02br
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01font00Please let me know your thoughts.02font02br
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01font00Thanks,02br
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  • 1blockquote 01cite 10vincent tee12cite 10 Hi English Guru, 12br 12br 10Would you please give a hand to help to verify my grammar & the structure of my english sentences resides from the letter below.
  • 12br 12br 11font 10Suggested improved version:12font 12br 12br 11font 12font 12br 12br 11font 10Hi Reena,12font 12br 12br 11font 10Since you told me that I could discuss anything with you, I would like to take the opportunity now.
  • Currently I am quite concerned about my future career and would like your comments.
  • For the past four months I have tried to contribute as much as I can.
  • I have worked around the clock and put in extra hours, even on Saturday and Sunday, to learn and to contribute to the team.
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