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Gariouslee Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Simple Letter Amendments (help & thanks)
Hi English Gurus,
Would somebody please help to amend my English Grammar & the structure as below in blue to make those words more presentable? Thanks.
Hi I’m Gary, an IT SAP Consultant from British American Tobacco. I have been working in the corporate industry for 4 years and have come to a point where I would like to live out my dream & passion as a corporate executive to an entrepreneur. At this moment, I am searching for a potential business partner who has the passion in IT, eager to pursue an entrepreneurship career, willing to invest and construct a successful company together
For those who are really interested, please do not hesitate to give me a call.
My Name: ***
Mobile #: ***
We could sit down & brainstorm for new ideas if you are interested but best if you posses those skill-set as below.
General Skills
- Good experience in running a business.
- Solid experience in Management & Financial SKills.
- Strong in Marketing & Sales Skills.
- Vast experience in the field of Information Technology.
- Good interpersonal skills.
Technical Skills
- Possess a VERY STRONG technical skill in Internet Marketing.
- Strong technical skills in Search Engine Optimization.
- Experience in Pay Per Click Advertising.
- Experience in computer programming and graphics skills.
Thanks,
Gary
Would somebody please help to amend my English Grammar & the structure as below in blue to make those words more presentable? Thanks.
Hi I’m Gary, an IT SAP Consultant from British American Tobacco. I have been working in the corporate industry for 4 years and have come to a point where I would like to live out my dream & passion as a corporate executive to an entrepreneur. At this moment, I am searching for a potential business partner who has the passion in IT, eager to pursue an entrepreneurship career, willing to invest and construct a successful company together
For those who are really interested, please do not hesitate to give me a call.
My Name: ***
Mobile #: ***
We could sit down & brainstorm for new ideas if you are interested but best if you posses those skill-set as below.
General Skills
- Good experience in running a business.
- Solid experience in Management & Financial SKills.
- Strong in Marketing & Sales Skills.
- Vast experience in the field of Information Technology.
- Good interpersonal skills.
Technical Skills
- Possess a VERY STRONG technical skill in Internet Marketing.
- Strong technical skills in Search Engine Optimization.
- Experience in Pay Per Click Advertising.
- Experience in computer programming and graphics skills.
Thanks,
Gary
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