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Please check my answers to see if I am on the right track and offer suggestions if needed:

Revise each sentence for simple, familiar language.

I worked like a dog and completed the assignment on time.

Revision: I worked very hard and completed the assignment on time.

A good writer is cognizant of how to utilize grammar in a correct fashion.

Revision: A good writer is aware of how to use grammar correctly.

In view of the fact that the microscope is defective, we expect a refund of our full purchase expenditure.

Revision: Since the microscope is defective, we expect a full refund.

I must undertake a prioritization of my commitments each day in terms of my schedule.

Revision: I must prioritize my everyday commitments in terms of my schedule.

  

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Hi, Please check my answers to see if I am on the right track and offer suggestions if needed: All OK except as noted. Revise each sentence for simple, familiar language. I worked like a dog and completed the assignment on time.

  • Hi, Please check my answers to see if I am on the right track and offer suggestions if needed: All OK except as noted.
  • Revise each sentence for simple, familiar language.
  • I worked like a dog and completed the assignment on time.
  • Revision: I worked very hard and completed the assignment on time.
  • This revision is OK.
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Hi,

Please check my answers to see if I am on the right track and offer suggestions if needed:

All OK except as noted.

Revise each sentence for simple, familiar language.

I worked like a dog and completed the assignment on time.

Revision: I worked very
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The damage to the radiator was the cause of malfunction of the cooling system.

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