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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
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similarily
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
It happens that there is a similar case. ( Similarily ), last September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was regretful that they run away without paying for the damage. The owner of car rental agency failed to claim a compensation for the damage which resulted in financial losses to him. Therefore, the owner posted a Chinese announcement on the official website, saying ”We’re considering no longer renting cars to Taiwanese tourists.”
It happens that there is a similar case. ( Similarily ), last September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was regretful that they run away without paying for the damage. The owner of car rental agency failed to claim a compensation for the damage which resulted in financial losses to him. Therefore, the owner posted a Chinese announcement on the official website, saying ”We’re considering no longer renting cars to Taiwanese tourists.”
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I would simplify it somewhat: It happens that there is a similar case. ( Similarily ), L ast September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was Regretfully that they run away without paying for the damage.
- I would simplify it somewhat: It happens that there is a similar case.
- ( Similarily ), L ast September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan.
- It was Regretfully that they run away without paying for the damage.
- Because the owner of car rental agency was unable to receive failed to claim a compensation for the damage, this which resulted in financial losses to him.
- ” Note: I do not think you want to say that the owner failed to file a claim , which is what this suggests.
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I would simplify it somewhat:
It happens that there is a similar case.( Similarily ), Last September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was Regretfully that they run away without paying for the damage
It happens that there is a similar case.
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