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Xmagedo Posted 15 years ago
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Siecntist essay! Help required,

Scientific inquiry is rooted in the desire to discover, but there is no discovery so important that in its pursuit a threat to human life can be tolerated.
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Scientist job is to discover new things that will help in our society, but not to pursuit a threat to a human life. It is true that some experiments might affect the society and lead to loss of human lives .
Some experiments on human can be tolerated when there is possibility to cure a certain disease, as an example, way to cure H1N1. It might result on losing one life but it will produce an antibiotic that will occur maximum benefit .
It is true, however, some discovery will pursuit threat to human lives. Take the NAZI, for instance, what they did in World War 2 to the prisoners have resulted in deaths of people and permanent disability without making any progress.

Scientist can overtake a human life when there is a possibility to cure dangerous disease. Such as AIDS.

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Pleas, when you check this essay. I want to know.
What are my mistakes?
Is my essay coherent ?
Thanks ahead.
Believe me guys, I am making progress because of you.
  

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Hi xmagedo; You need to learn more about singular, plural and when to use the articles (a, the, an). ------------------------------------ Scientific inquiry is rooted in the desire to discover, but there is no discovery so important that in its pursuit a threat to human life can be tolerated. __ Scientist job is to discover new things that will help in our society, but not to pursuit a threat to a human life.

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  • Hi xmagedo; You need to learn more about singular, plural and when to use the articles (a, the, an).
  • ------------------------------------ Scientific inquiry is rooted in the desire to discover, but there is no discovery so important that in its pursuit a threat to human life can be tolerated.
  • __ Scientist job is to discover new things that will help in our society, but not to pursuit a threat to a human life.
  • It is true that some experiments might affect the society and lead to loss of human lives .
  • Some experiments on human can be tolerated when there is possibility to cure a certain disease, as an example, way to cure H1N1.
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Hi xmagedo;

You need to learn more about singular, plural and when to use the articles (a, the, an). I have made some suggestions in bold, and highlighted places that need attention.------------------------------------

Scientific inquiry is rooted in the desire to discover, but there is no discovery so important that in its pursuit a threat to human life can be tolerated. __
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Thank you for replay.

But I have a question for you, in the line Take the **** ?! was the here wrong ?!
Also, to the prisoners HAVE ...?! why is it mistake ? Do you mean we should replace it with has because of **** ?
What is wrong with pursuit ?!
Finally, Scientist ! should it be plural ? if yes, then why ?!

Thanks, you helped a lot. Much appreciate.
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Hi;

Pursuit is a noun. You are using it incorrectly as a verb.
You are missing determiners before nouns when one is required.

Only the first letter of **** is capitalized. A **** is a member of a certain historical German political party.

Take the ****, for instance, what they did in World War 2 to the prisoners
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Thanks for clarfication.
But I have one final question that I forgot to mention in previous replay.
In final line, you hihglighted " such as" ?! May you explain it pleas ?

Thanks
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xmagedoBut I have one final question that I forgot to mention in previous reply. (A replay is when a performer plays a song, and the audience likes it so much that they ask him to replay it.) .
In final line, you highlighted " such as" ?! May Could you explain it please ?
Yes. Such as AIDS is n
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