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Mr. Streetwise Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Sick application letter
1 b 00 Hello, Could someone please have a look at the sick application letter below for grammar mistakes, and weird sentences? 02 br
02 b 01 i 00 ____________________________________________________________________ 02 i 02 br
00 Dear Madam, 02 br
00 The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was I was seriously afflicted with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock in the previous night. The doctor had given me some injections, and had advised me to take some rest, as the energy level had been quite low. 02 br
01 font 00 Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time. 02 font 02 br
00 Meanwhile, thanking you and assuring you of my efforts as ever I put in. 02 br
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00 With great regards, 02 br
02 br
00 Sincerely, 02 br
00 Name 02 br
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01 i 00 ____________________________________________________________________ 02 i 0-
02 b 01 i 00 ____________________________________________________________________ 02 i 02 br
00 Dear Madam, 02 br
00 The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was I was seriously afflicted with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock in the previous night. The doctor had given me some injections, and had advised me to take some rest, as the energy level had been quite low. 02 br
01 font 00 Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time. 02 font 02 br
00 Meanwhile, thanking you and assuring you of my efforts as ever I put in. 02 br
02 br
00 With great regards, 02 br
02 br
00 Sincerely, 02 br
00 Name 02 br
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01 i 00 ____________________________________________________________________ 02 i 0-
Top answer
02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Dear Madam, 02 br 00 The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was that i was seriously ill with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock the previous night. 02 br 00 Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time.
- 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Dear Madam, 02 br 00 The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was that i was seriously ill with gastric pain.
- I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock the previous night.
- 02 br 00 Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time.
- 02 br 02 br 00 With great regards, 02 br 02 br 00 Sincerely, 02 br 00 Name 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 In Canada, the above would not be suitable.
- Sick leave is normally something that the employee is entitled to use, sometimes with the provision of a doctor's note if the absence is greater than 3 days.
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2 Answers
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 I've suggested a few changes, followed by an alternative version. 02 br
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01 font 00 Dear Madam, 02 br
00 The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was that i was seriously ill with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock the previous night. The doctor gave me some inje
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00 I've suggested a few changes, followed by an alternative version. 02 br
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01 font 00 Dear Madam, 02 br
00 The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was that i was seriously ill with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock the previous night. The doctor gave me some inje
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Dont be worried about that .
When you have time and good health then you can come.
See you bye
When you have time and good health then you can come.
See you bye
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