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Leplusfort Posted 14 years ago
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Shown about tensions about Syria&Turkey

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I must working about the tensions about Syria and Turkey. Can you check my spelling or my syntax ? Thanks. Or if you want to give some informations about this story, the are welcome !

On Friday October 28th, mortar destroyed houses, without injuried. But on Wednesday, several mortars killed five turkish and hurt a dozen people in the village of Akçakale, next to the border of Syrian. The Turkish Parlement was summoned for an extraordinary session. The Parlement decided to allow the government to take the military action against Syria. There were bombing to Syria. And that ended on Thursday morning. After these events, there has been international condemnation. Allies of Turkey showed an unwavering solidarity with Turkey, but call to the retention of the Turkey. The NATO, association which belongs to Turkey, called Syria to stop its provocations. For Ban Ki-Moon, he said he was worried about theses tensions. Turkish people is itself divided. One part is for the retaliation but one that is against this war. Demonstrations were also held against theses actions.
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) And that ended on Thursday morning. ) After these events (what events)

  • ) And that ended on Thursday morning.
  • ) After these events (what events)
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Just a few things: (not a comprehensive check)

take the military action against Syria
There were bombing to Syria (what do you mean?)
And that ended on Thursday morning. (What does "that" refer to?)
After these events (what events)

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