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Tamguatlay Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Should there be a comma after ‘light’?

Daimyo magazine will always strive to be the beacon of light sharing the warmth of ABC Buddhism in the cold winter darkness.

1. Should there be a comma after ‘light’?

2, Is "sharing" the correct verb?

Thanks.

  

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tamguatlay 1. Should there be a comma after ‘light’? That depends on whether you you think the magazine or the light is sharing the warmth.

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  • tamguatlay 1.
  • Should there be a comma after ‘light’?
  • That depends on whether you you think the magazine or the light is sharing the warmth.
  • Either way, you have a textbook mixed metaphor.
  • It shares light or warmth.
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tamguatlay1. Should there be a comma after ‘light’?

That depends on whether you you think the magazine or the light is sharing the warmth. Either way, you have a textbook mixed metaphor. It shares light or warmth. Pick one, or recast from scratch to include both, but separately.

tamguatlay2, Is "sharing" the correct verb?
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