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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Should it say you or yours

here is the rental agreement with you and Fayanne’s changes.
  

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I think it reads much more smoothly with one of the following: Here is the rental agreement with Fayanne's changes and yours. Here is the rental agreement with changes made by you and Fayanne.

— Philip

  • I think it reads much more smoothly with one of the following: Here is the rental agreement with Fayanne's changes and yours.
  • Here is the rental agreement with changes made by you and Fayanne.
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I think it reads much more smoothly with one of the following:

Here is the rental agreement with Fayanne's changes and yours.

Here is the rental agreement with changes made by you and Fayanne.
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