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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Should it be 'in' or 'after'?

The White Dragonarmy engaged the Whitestone Forces, which were under the command of Laurana Kanan, along the banks of the Vingaard River, near the rapid channel called the Narrows, but was defeated and destroyed after/in a bloody battle.
  

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in. And the sentence has some rather awkward constructs with all the commas.

  • in.
  • And the sentence has some rather awkward constructs with all the commas.
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in.

And the sentence has some rather awkward constructs with all the commas.
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Thanks for your help, but I see what you mean, I'll definitely revise it.

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