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COUME Posted 22 years ago
Grammar

Should I use "Introduction" or "Presentation"

Hello,

I have a problem to decide between 2 words... both seems correct to me, but I do not know, which one is the more adequate to the situation.
In fact, I write a kind of brochure to introduce our service to potential customers then sould I say:

Introduction of our Web Analytics solution

or

Presentation of our Web Analytics solution

or ???


Feel free to give your comments, even if you say that both sentences are crap!Emotion: smile

Thanks
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Top answer

Hi, since u say that u are writing a kind of brochure for a potential customer, it will be apt to say: "Introduction of our Web Analytics solution " when you use the word, "Introduction" in the above case, it will make the customer more interested and attentive as people usually concentrate more on what is given in the introduction part of a brochure/manual etc rather than other topics. hope that helps.

  • Hi, since u say that u are writing a kind of brochure for a potential customer, it will be apt to say: "Introduction of our Web Analytics solution " when you use the word, "Introduction" in the above case, it will make the customer more interested and attentive as people usually concentrate more on what is given in the introduction part of a brochure/manual etc rather than other topics.
  • hope that helps.
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Hi,
since u say that u are writing a kind of brochure for a potential customer, it will be apt to say:
"Introduction of our Web Analytics solution "

when you use the word, "Introduction" in the above case, it will make the customer more interested and attentive as people usually concentrate more on what is given in the introduction part of a brochure/manual etc
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thxs for the tip 8)

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