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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Should I reword this sentence?
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Should I reword this sentence?
We shall bear the responsibility for the conclusion which we state, based on the audit performed by us, in connection with the aforementioned financial account.
Thank you!
Should I reword this sentence?
We shall bear the responsibility for the conclusion which we state, based on the audit performed by us, in connection with the aforementioned financial account.
Thank you!
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I count 25 words. Be kind to your reader: say the same thing in fewer words. Start by leaving out the unnecessary: are you responsible for conclusions that you don't state?
- I count 25 words.
- Be kind to your reader: say the same thing in fewer words.
- Start by leaving out the unnecessary: are you responsible for conclusions that you don't state?
- " 15 words.
- A 40% reduction in words; a 40% increase in kindness.
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I count 25 words. Be kind to your reader: say the same thing in fewer words. Start by leaving out the unnecessary: are you responsible for conclusions that you don't state?
"We are responsible for the conclusion based on our audit of the aforementioned financial account."
15 words. A 40% reduction in words; a 40% increase in kindness. And it says the same things:
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"We are responsible for the conclusion based on our audit of the aforementioned financial account."
15 words. A 40% reduction in words; a 40% increase in kindness. And it says the same things:
1.
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