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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Should I re-word this?

Hi!
Should I re-word this? Or is it clear?

During the conversation the husband started to raise his voice while talking with his wife; he started to act in an aggressive manner and consequently hit the wife's head with his fist.

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I would replace consequently with subsequently .

  • I would replace consequently with subsequently .
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I would replace consequently with subsequently.

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