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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Should I put "starting from July18th" after "would it be possible that..."
Dear Ms. XXX
I'm XXX, the summer student who is coming to work on July 4th.
I have a request about the working time during the month. Since I applied for a summer course from XXX University earlier, I just got their reply and they accepted me.
However, the course starts from July 18 - August 12 (10am-1pm), which is clashed with my summer internship. I'm very happy that XXX University accepted me but at the same time I don't want to miss the opportunity to learn in your company, so I'm thinking of a way that would work for both. Would it be possible that I come to work after getting out of class starting from July 18th?
Sorry for the inconvenience. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
XXX
I'm XXX, the summer student who is coming to work on July 4th.
I have a request about the working time during the month. Since I applied for a summer course from XXX University earlier, I just got their reply and they accepted me.
However, the course starts from July 18 - August 12 (10am-1pm), which is clashed with my summer internship. I'm very happy that XXX University accepted me but at the same time I don't want to miss the opportunity to learn in your company, so I'm thinking of a way that would work for both. Would it be possible that I come to work after getting out of class starting from July 18th?
Sorry for the inconvenience. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
XXX
Top answer
Hi, Here are some suggested edits. Dear Ms. *** I am working for IBM as a summer intern from July 4th.
- Hi, Here are some suggested edits.
- Dear Ms.
- *** I am working for IBM as a summer intern from July 4th.
- to July 31st, (9am to 5pm).
- I applied earlier for a summer course at *** University.
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Hi,
Here are some suggested edits.
Dear Ms. ***
I am working for IBM as a summer intern from July 4th. to July 31st, (9am to 5pm).
I applied earlier for a summer course at *** University. They have just
Here are some suggested edits.
Dear Ms. ***
I am working for IBM as a summer intern from July 4th. to July 31st, (9am to 5pm).
I applied earlier for a summer course at *** University. They have just
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