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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Should I include the "which was"?

Each of the five distinct armies of Takhisis was commanded by a Dragon Highlord, (which was) the highest-ranking position in the dragonarmies.
  

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There is a bigger problem here. A position is different from the commander. ) who had earned the position of Dragon Highlord, the highest-ranking position in the dragonarmies.

  • There is a bigger problem here.
  • A position is different from the commander.
  • ) who had earned the position of Dragon Highlord, the highest-ranking position in the dragonarmies.
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There is a bigger problem here. A position is different from the commander.

Each of the five distinct armies of Takhisis was commanded by a general(?) who had earned the position of Dragon Highlord, the highest-ranking position in the dragonarmies.
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Thanks for your help. How is this revision? Each of the five distinct armies of Takhisis was commanded by a Dragon Highlord, the highest-ranking office in the dragonarmies.

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