0
Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Should I have the "which match...color" in between commas or get rid of them?
He had a beard, which matched his hair color, for most of his life outside of Qualinesti, and had high, chiseled cheekbones, a lean and muscled torso, and brooding green eyes that he got from his mother.
Top answer
Your sentence has enough commas without those two. Keep in mind (for stylistic purposes) that you don't have to give a person's entire description in only one sentence.
- Your sentence has enough commas without those two.
- Keep in mind (for stylistic purposes) that you don't have to give a person's entire description in only one sentence.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
Your sentence has enough commas without those two. Keep in mind (for stylistic purposes) that you don't have to give a person's entire description in only one sentence.
0
Related Questions