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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Should I have the second "who"?

However, the real mastermind was actually a powerful wizard named Jack, a gnome who had been trained by illithids and other powerful creatures and who had been secretly controlling Clan Karuck’s different shamans for centuries.
  

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I think it reads better with the second 'who'.

— Philip

  • I think it reads better with the second 'who'.
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I think it reads better with the second 'who'.
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