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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Should I get rid of the "observed"?

Returning home from his nightly gallivanting, Faros saw his house beginning to be consumed by flames and observed assassins surrounding the complex
  

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No! It would sound like assassins were also consuming the complex .

  • No!
  • It would sound like assassins were also consuming the complex .
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No! It would sound like assassins were also consuming the complex Emotion: wink.

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