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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Should I change the 'they' to 'military order'?

Kharas fought alongside the Knights of Solamnia, who were so impressed by his courage, nobility, and martial skills that they awarded him with the name "Kharas", which meant "knight" in the Solamnic language. This essentially made Kharas an honorary member of the Solamnic Knighthood, the highest accolade that (they/military order) could bestow upon an outsider.
  

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Yes, I think it works better.

  • Yes, I think it works better.
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Yes, I think it works better. Emotion: wink

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