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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Should I add the "she"s?
Throughout the years of the Dragon Purge, Beryllinthranox killed all of the lesser dragons in the area, with a few minor exceptions of those who offered to serve her, and (she) grew considerably in size and power. In 408 AC, Beryllinthranox discovered how to create a dragon skull totem and harness arcane energies from it, and (she) enlarged the Qualinesti forest so that the woods enveloped the elven kingdom’s borders, increasing the size of her own domain.
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In sentences with two verbs for the subject, a conjunction is all you need. However, if you repeat (or change) the subject, a comma is necessary. [ John went to the store and bought groceries.
- In sentences with two verbs for the subject, a conjunction is all you need.
- However, if you repeat (or change) the subject, a comma is necessary.
- [ John went to the store and bought groceries.
- ] [ John went to the store, and then he went to the drugstore.
- ] To answer your question: yes, use the 'she' in both cases, which will make your sentence clearer.
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In sentences with two verbs for the subject, a conjunction is all you need. However, if you repeat (or change) the subject, a comma is necessary. [ John went to the store and bought groceries. ] [ John went to the store, and then he went to the drugstore. ] To answer your question: yes, use the 'she' in both cases, which will make your sentence clearer.
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