Should I add the "she"?

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During the War of Souls in 421 AC, Beryllinthranox continued her schemes against the elves, and (she) became considerably interested when she learned of Palin’s arrival in Qualinesti and that he was in possession of a powerful magical artifact known as the Device of Time Journeying.

Philip · Accepted Answer

No problem with 'she'.

Cboutin3 · Answer

Is that a yes add the "she"?

Philip · Answer

cboutin3Is that a yes add the "she"?

Yep!

Cboutin3 · Answer

Thanks so much for your assistance! I clearly should add subject pronouns in my longer and more complex sentences that use commas, but what should I do in sentences like these examples?
1. Onysablet measured two hundred forty feet from head to tail, and possessed bat-like wings and a sinuous body. Onysablet had two ivory horns that pointed downward from her dark head, and an acidic demeanor.
2.Skie was covered in sapphire scales, and had a sleek and muscular body.
3. From nose to tail, she was almost one hundred feet in length, and was covered in sleek black scales.
4. Feal-Thas also possessed the arrogance of the Silvanesti, and treated most people with a measure of disdain and contempt.

Philip · Answer

I think you can get along without any of them.

Cboutin3 · Answer

You mean get rid of the commas in all of them?

Philip · Answer

cboutin3You mean get rid of the commas in all of them?

Sorry, in # 3 keep the comma after 'tail'.

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