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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Should I add an 'and' after 'war'???

Ms. Sirleaf made her choice and did not look back, even when her son found himself in the midst of war, even when he begged to come home.
  

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You could add "and", but I think the sentence flows much better (and is more powerful) if you don't.

  • You could add "and", but I think the sentence flows much better (and is more powerful) if you don't.
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You could add "and", but I think the sentence flows much better (and is more powerful) if you don't.
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AnonymousMs. Sirleaf made her choice and did not look back, even when her son found himself in the midst of war, even when he begged to come home.
No need at all. Not even sure it would be correct. It's a great sentence.

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