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NL888 Posted 13 years ago
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Should "and more than 100,000 die" be "and kills more than 100,000"?

Or "and causes more than 100,000 deaths" (I am not sure whether I've used "deaths" correctly here)?
Use of "and more than 100,000 die" sounds a bit stilted in grammar. Am I on the right track?

Context:

Structural Biology Triumph Offers Hope Against a Childhood Killer

  1. http://www.sciencemag.org/search?author1=Jon+Cohen&sortspec=date&submit=Submit

Summary

Respiratory syncytial virus (RSV) sends millions of children to the hospital each year with pneumonia and related severe diseases and more than 100,000 die. No vaccine exists. Using the sophisticated tools of structural biology, researchers last spring identified a region on an RSV surface protein that binds highly effective antibodies. Now they have upped the ante and engineered a version of that protein prominently features that region. When injected into animals, the designer protein triggered production of remarkably potent antibodies, shaking up the crowded field searching for that elusive vaccine.
  

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NL888 Should "and more than 100,000 die" be "and kills more than 100,000"? No. NL888 Or "and causes more than 100,000 deaths" (I am not sure whether I've used "deaths" correctly here)?

  • NL888 Should "and more than 100,000 die" be "and kills more than 100,000"?
  • No.
  • NL888 Or "and causes more than 100,000 deaths" (I am not sure whether I've used "deaths" correctly here)?
  • You have, but no.
  • NL888 Use of "and more than 100,000 die" sounds a bit stilted in grammar.
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NL888Should "and more than 100,000 die" be "and kills more than 100,000"?
No.
NL888Or "and causes more than 100,000 deaths" (I am not sure whether I've used "deaths" correctly here)?
You have, but no.
NL888Use of "and more than 100,000 die" sounds a bit stilted in grammar. Am I on the right track?

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