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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Shoul I repeat this part?

Hi!

Should I repeat the part in bold or is it possible to write sentence without it?

Iodine contributes to the health of thyroid gland, but other components – to the health of blood vessels, joints, bones, hair, and nails.

Thanks for your input!
  

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I suggest this. Iodine contributes to the health of the thyroid gland, and is also good for blood vessels, joints, bones, hair and nails. Clive

  • I suggest this.
  • Iodine contributes to the health of the thyroid gland, and is also good for blood vessels, joints, bones, hair and nails.
  • Clive
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I suggest this.

Iodine contributes to the health of the thyroid gland, and is also good for blood vessels, joints, bones, hair and nails.

Clive
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AnonymousShould I repeat the part in bold or is it possible to write sentence without it?
Iodine contributes to the health of thyroid gland, but other components substances contribute to the health of blood vessels, joints, bones, hair, and nails.
I would write it as shown above, but if your sentence is
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AnonymousHi!Should I repeat the part in bold or is it possible to write sentence without it?Iodine contributes to the health of thyroid gland, but other components – to the health of blood vessels, joints, bones, hair, and nails. Thanks for your input!
'Components' of what? Iodine?

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