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Successor Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Shortened sentence

Hello, I would like to hear your opinion on the following sentences:

1. When you are camping wild, you don't camp on a recognised site, you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up and enjoy the solitude.

2. When camping wild, you don't camp on a recognised site, you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up and enjoy the solitude.

3. Camping wild, you don't camp on a recognised site, you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up and enjoy the solitude.

Could we also use conjunctions AS and WHILE? Thank you for your answers.
  

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'As' and 'while' do not work in these sentences. 1. When you are camping in the wild, you don't camp on a recognised site ; you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up and enjoy the solitude.

  • 'As' and 'while' do not work in these sentences.
  • 1.
  • When you are camping in the wild, you don't camp on a recognised site ; you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up and enjoy the solitude.
  • 2.
  • When camping in the wild, you don't camp on a recognised site ; you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up, and enjoy the solitude.
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'As' and 'while' do not work in these sentences.

1. When you are camping in the wild, you don't camp on a recognised site; you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your tent up and enjoy the solitude.

2. When camping in the wild, you don't camp on a recognised site; you just find a spot 'in the middle of nowhere', put your ten

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