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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
A day before the Thanksgiving Day, the school was closed and the weather was around 70 degrees. It was the perfect day to visit the museum. As a student of modern art history, visiting a museum is the only way to fully experience a work of art. By visiting the , I was able to look at the peacock room and some sculptures these I have seen on the textbook.
When I visiting the freer gallery of art, a wide range of Asian art was going on as well as work by American artists. Such as Arts of the Islamic World, Chinese Art, Japanese art, Korean ceramics, Arts of the Indian subcontinent and the Himalayas and Vietnamese ceramics from the red river delta. All exhibitions were fabulous and remarkable however, James Mcneill Whistler’s the peacock room was definitely caught my eyes. It was a way beyond gorgeous than I expected, now I understood that why Professor. Lash was so excited when she explained about the peacock room in the class. It was truly a stunning and magnificent work of art. I looked around carefully for half hour and asked a museum staff that it is okay to take a picture in the peacock room. She said it’s okay to take a picture without flashing so I took some pictures
This art museum trip became the primary inspiration which awakened my vision of the art. I really enjoyed and plaining to visit another art museum during winter break.
Thanks for your help and time
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A day before the Thanksgiving Day, the school was closed and the weather was around 70 degrees. It was the perfect day to visit the museum. As a student of modern art history, visiting a museum is the only way to fully experience a work of art. By visiting the , I was able to look at the peacock room and some sculptures these I have seen on the textbook.
When I visiting the freer gallery of art, a wide range of Asian art was going on as well as work by American artists. Such as Arts of the Islamic World, Chinese Art, Japanese art, Korean ceramics, Arts of the Indian subcontinent and the Himalayas and Vietnamese ceramics from the red river delta. All exhibitions were fabulous and remarkable however, James Mcneill Whistler’s the peacock room was definitely caught my eyes. It was a way beyond gorgeous than I expected, now I understood that why Professor. Lash was so excited when she explained about the peacock room in the class. It was truly a stunning and magnificent work of art. I looked around carefully for half hour and asked a museum staff that it is okay to take a picture in the peacock room. She said it’s okay to take a picture without flashing so I took some pictures
This art museum trip became the primary inspiration which awakened my vision of the art. I really enjoyed and plaining to visit another art museum during winter break.
Thanks for your help and time
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Hello, I think you must check grammar and vocabulary ( for example, you have to say "the" day before and not a day, temperature outside was of xx degrees). Is it a formal or informal writing? Try not to repeat "Arts", and replace it with "work" (of art).
- Hello, I think you must check grammar and vocabulary ( for example, you have to say "the" day before and not a day, temperature outside was of xx degrees).
- Is it a formal or informal writing?
- Try not to repeat "Arts", and replace it with "work" (of art).
- Anyway, you should wait for native's advice
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Hello,
I think you must check grammar and vocabulary ( for example, you have to say "the" day before and not a day, temperature outside was of xx degrees).
Is it a formal or informal writing?
Try not to repeat "Arts", and replace it with "work" (of art).
Anyway, you should wait for native's advice
I think you must check grammar and vocabulary ( for example, you have to say "the" day before and not a day, temperature outside was of xx degrees).
Is it a formal or informal writing?
Try not to repeat "Arts", and replace it with "work" (of art).
Anyway, you should wait for native's advice
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