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Lission Posted 17 years ago
Hi everybody
Could some member/members go through the short story and correct any errors found in it?
Many thanks in advance.
One sunny day, Father suggested going to the beach. Brother and I were happy to hear that, as we had not been there for a long time. Father drove Mum and us to our destination.
On reaching the place, all of us went to look for a spot to put our things. We found one under a shady tree. Then Father, Brotherr and I went to the changing room to change into our swimming suits. Then we went for a swim. Father taught us how to do it the correct strokes. Brother and I had a wonderful time learning under Father. About half an hour later, I told Father that I was tired. We went back to where Mother was. She was engrossed in a novel.
Soon it was time for lunch. We ate the food that Mother had cooked for the picnic. After our meal, Father decided to stay with Mum, and read the newspaper which he had brought from home.
Brother and I strolled along the beach to look for a spot to make a sandcastle. Having found one, both of us worked together to achieve what we set out to do. We were very satisfied when we saw that the sandcastle we had made was very beautiful.
By then it was evening, so Father said it was time for us to go home. Brother and I were so tired that we dozed in the car on the way home.
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Hi everybody
Could some member/members go through the short story and correct any errors found in it?
Many thanks in advance.
One sunny day, Father suggested going to the beach. Brother and I were happy to hear that, as we had not been there for a long time. Father drove Mum and us to our destination.
On reaching the place, all of us went to look for a spot to put our things. We found one under a shady tree. Then Father, Brotherr and I went to the changing room to change into our swimming suits. Then we went for a swim. Father taught us how to do it the correct strokes. Brother and I had a wonderful time learning under Father. About half an hour later, I told Father that I was tired. We went back to where Mother was. She was engrossed in a novel.
Soon it was time for lunch. We ate the food that Mother had cooked for the picnic. After our meal, Father decided to stay with Mum, and read the newspaper which he had brought from home.
Brother and I strolled along the beach to look for a spot to make a sandcastle. Having found one, both of us worked together to achieve what we set out to do. We were very satisfied when we saw that the sandcastle we had made was very beautiful.
By then it was evening, so Father said it was time for us to go home. Brother and I were so tired that we dozed in the car on the way home.
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Lission Hi everybody Could some member/members go through the short story and correct any errors found in it? Many thanks in advance. One One day, on a sunny day, Father suggested going to the beach.
- Lission Hi everybody Could some member/members go through the short story and correct any errors found in it?
- Many thanks in advance.
- One One day, on a sunny day, Father suggested going to the beach.
- My brother and I were happy to hear that, as we had not been there for a long time.
- Father drove Mum and us to our destination.
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Lission
Hi everybody
Could some member/members go through the short story and correct any errors found in it?
Many thanks in advance.OneOne day, on a sunny day, Father suggested going to the beach. My brother and I were happy to hear that, as we had not been there for a long time. Father drove Mum and us to our des
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