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Anon006 Posted 7 years ago
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Short story

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One day the little duckling went out for a walk, and as she was walking through the grassland, she fell through a hole and couldn’t get out. Scared and worried she started to quack as loud as she could, and within minutes the other animals heard her cry for help and came to her rescue.

  

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One day a little duckling went out for a walk, and as she was walking through the grassland, she fell into a hole and couldn’t get out. Scared and worried, she started to quack as loudly as she could, and within minutes the other animals heard her cry for help and came to her rescue.

  • One day a little duckling went out for a walk, and as she was walking through the grassland, she fell into a hole and couldn’t get out.
  • Scared and worried, she started to quack as loudly as she could, and within minutes the other animals heard her cry for help and came to her rescue.
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One day a little duckling went out for a walk, and as she was walking through the grassland, she fell into a hole and couldn’t get out. Scared and worried, she started to quack as loudly as she could, and within minutes the other animals heard her cry for help and came to her rescue.

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