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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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short story

Although the outside world around had been summoning him for quite some time, the fear of being snatched by the jaws of gang activity and violence that South Auckland had been associated with had been enough settle his bitter old soul.

can somebody help me? is that sentence too long? im struggling with the concept of sentence structure
  

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Although the outside world had been summoning him for quite some time, the fear of being snatched in the jaws of South Aukland gang activity and violence was enough to unsettle his bitter old soul.

  • Although the outside world had been summoning him for quite some time, the fear of being snatched in the jaws of South Aukland gang activity and violence was enough to unsettle his bitter old soul.
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Although the outside world had been summoning him for quite some time, the fear of being snatched in the jaws of South Aukland gang activity and violence was enough to unsettle his bitter old soul.

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