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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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short story

0 Could someone please edit this short story meant for Yr 1 students? Thanks in advance.02br
00 00Once a dog was walking near a river when he saw his refection in the water. He saw another00 00 02br
00 00dog with a bone in its mouth. He wanted the other bone when he had already one in his 00month.00When he opened his month to try to get the other dog's bone, his bone fell into the water. 02br
00He was very sad because the other dog would now have two bones.00 0-
  

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He was very sad because the other dog ..... one of the bones fellinto the water so where did the second bone come from? 0-

— Doll

  • He was very sad because the other dog .....
  • one of the bones fellinto the water so where did the second bone come from?
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0 One day a dog was walking through the river when he saw its reflection in the water.Then, he saw another dog with a bone in its mouth but he wanted the other bone though he already had one in his mouth.Just as he opened his mouth to try to get the other dog's bone, his bone fell into the water.He was very sad because the other dog ..... --wait wait.one of the bones fellinto the water so wher
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0 I didn't understand, do you wanna anybody rewrite your story, changing it, or just fixing the mistakes?? 0-
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01cite10Doll12cite10One day a dog was walking through the river when he saw its reflection in the water.Then, he saw another dog with a bone in its mouth but he wanted the other bone though he already had one in his mouth.Just as he opened his mouth to try to get the other dog's bone, his bone fell into the water.He was very sad because
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0Please correct any errors in the short passage and any suggestions are welcome.02br
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0 Thanks, Doll. 0-
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0Ah, I have understood the story just now:D.D I see now where the second bone and dog come from:D 0-
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0The second bone and dog come from the shadow in the water , I have heard of that story. 050010id1
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