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Levis1 Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing

Short sentences

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Dear Jamie, we could definitely ship out a mouth guard to you and if you take a picture of yourself wearing the mouth guard we will waive the shipping fee. Which mouth guard would you like to purchase?

  

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I would make a couple of changes: Dear Jamie, We could can definitely ship out a mouth guard to you. ] a picture of yourself wearing the mouth guard , we will waive the shipping fee. Which mouth guard would you like to purchase?

— Doctor D

  • I would make a couple of changes: Dear Jamie, We could can definitely ship out a mouth guard to you.
  • ] a picture of yourself wearing the mouth guard , we will waive the shipping fee.
  • Which mouth guard would you like to purchase?
  • [ Name ]
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I would make a couple of changes:

Dear Jamie,

We could can definitely ship out a mouth guard to you. and If you take [send us?] a picture of yourself wearing the mouth guard, we will waive the shipping fee. Which mouth guard would you like to purchase?

[Name]

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